newer spreads

these are the newest revisions.
i feel like my problem is making the body text interesting.
i cannot get out of my "box."

and the beat goes on...

so here are the spreads...most of them have been tweaked.
i think i am still struggling with the [wear] dept.
but i think the rest is getting there....i hope.
the fashion spread i think needs work...but i like the updates.
the on-line dating piece i was envisioning like a comic strip for the images...so that's what i was going for on the first jump....i think the second jump still alludes to that but i did not want as many images.

any comments or feedback would be most welcome!