newer spreads

these are the newest revisions.
i feel like my problem is making the body text interesting.
i cannot get out of my "box."

and the beat goes on...

so here are the spreads...most of them have been tweaked.
i think i am still struggling with the [wear] dept.
but i think the rest is getting there....i hope.
the fashion spread i think needs work...but i like the updates.
the on-line dating piece i was envisioning like a comic strip for the images...so that's what i was going for on the first jump....i think the second jump still alludes to that but i did not want as many images.

any comments or feedback would be most welcome!

getting there....

so here are all my pages (except the back of the book page...waiting for text).
but i think i am ok with two of my dept pages...the WEAR page i am still struggling with.

i am digging the DIRTY THIRTY feature....
the other two i think need tweaking.

feature pages...draft 1.

UPDATED dept pages

from the comments g left i fixed the rubric (hopefully it is better) and changed the body copy text from avenir to a form of DIN.