good start.the typography needs tweaking.remind me to put one phrase in the computer and play around.maybe i can figure something in class.okay?meanwhile, you work on it too.typeface is good.words need to fit together better.designer labels could be in another typeface and much smaller.maybe.that's where i'd start.overall good.bring indesign files.make sure you collect for output.i'll play with them in class.okay?g.
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good start.
the typography needs tweaking.
remind me to put one phrase in the computer and play around.
maybe i can figure something in class.
okay?
meanwhile, you work on it too.
typeface is good.
words need to fit together better.
designer labels could be in another typeface and much smaller.
maybe.
that's where i'd start.
overall good.
bring indesign files.
make sure you collect for output.
i'll play with them in class.
okay?
g.
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