umm.been watching you develop these.like your image choices.dun like your rubric.could be more subtle, more sophisticated.look at portfolio mag.also, still working with a round text face?it's dated.try din 8.5/11.nice.will work with your headline, which i like a lot.before you change the subhead, try the din and let's see.try caecilia too.small and faded back 70-80%.good.g.
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umm.
been watching you develop these.
like your image choices.
dun like your rubric.
could be more subtle, more sophisticated.
look at portfolio mag.
also, still working with a round text face?
it's dated.
try din 8.5/11.
nice.
will work with your headline, which i like a lot.
before you change the subhead, try the din and let's see.
try caecilia too.
small and faded back 70-80%.
good.
g.
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